This idea of eating together with strangers is not a bad idea. I wouldn't mind enjoying a meal with a couple of people I don't know. For example, people in our generation seem to have theirs head down and ear-buds plugged in when waiting for food even if they are with their own family.When you interact with more people it can help you gets benefits, such as more friends, socializing skills, and lots more.This gives us an opportunity for the people who are more loner and have not much friends.Therefore, communal dining in restaurants are a favorable idea.
Sitting on a chair in a cafe together will help people interact more instead of people playing on their electronics. Playing on a phone while eating will separate iteration with our families, what is the point of going to a restaurant with someone if you are not even going to talk to them.Data collected from "Screen lock app" says that and average person checks their phone up to 110 times every day.Imagine how much hours you are taking away from socializing. Basically, and average person is spending more time just tapping on a small screen than just talking with the ones near you. At the end this will help people to get off their phones talk more to people face to face!
Communal dining can even help you learn!For example, we are constantly talking and meeting new people for people who are more to the shy side it will help them to be more sociable. That one skill can lead to much more like making new friends outside of the restaurant.Also,we share information like our own cultures and then we get interested in that specific person. Maybe just from one idea can lead to more then just friendship.
In conclusion, this idea is no different then a bar because when u sit by a bar you tell someone to go away when they sit beside you it is the same as this idea.This will help people to get better at socializing.which will lead to less phones and more talking with real people.Therefore I support this idea of communal dining in surrey.
BY:Minho Cho
Sitting on a chair in a cafe together will help people interact more instead of people playing on their electronics. Playing on a phone while eating will separate iteration with our families, what is the point of going to a restaurant with someone if you are not even going to talk to them.Data collected from "Screen lock app" says that and average person checks their phone up to 110 times every day.Imagine how much hours you are taking away from socializing. Basically, and average person is spending more time just tapping on a small screen than just talking with the ones near you. At the end this will help people to get off their phones talk more to people face to face!
Communal dining can even help you learn!For example, we are constantly talking and meeting new people for people who are more to the shy side it will help them to be more sociable. That one skill can lead to much more like making new friends outside of the restaurant.Also,we share information like our own cultures and then we get interested in that specific person. Maybe just from one idea can lead to more then just friendship.
In conclusion, this idea is no different then a bar because when u sit by a bar you tell someone to go away when they sit beside you it is the same as this idea.This will help people to get better at socializing.which will lead to less phones and more talking with real people.Therefore I support this idea of communal dining in surrey.
BY:Minho Cho
Minho, I like how the ideas in your paragraphs are nicely organized and detailed. For example, you have your introduction, 2 main ideas, and a conclusion which makes the reader easier to understand. Next time, go over your grammer and punctuation before you publish because you made some minor mistakes such as this sentence you wrote, "Playing on a phone while eating will separate iteration* with our families, what is the point of going to a restaurant with someone if you are not even going to talk to them." which is a run on sentence. Also, "iteration" doesnt suit the sentence and so you should check the vocabulary words/spelling before posting. Make sure to not use internet slangs when writing a post such as "u, r, w/o." Overall, you had clear ideas and a nice structure with some minor mistakes. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI liked how you wrote your paragraphs you had lots of detail. It was claer what you were writing about I could understand it. I would suggest for next time you Check your grammer and punctuation over. You forgot put spaces in between some words. You did a good job with your paragraphs and your cureent events post was well done. Good job.
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